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1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie. (He's just human but.... with nanotech in his body)
4. [X] They are physically strong. (He can lift a battlecruiser )
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. Johnny: Do you have any idea what human looks like? You cocksuckers
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red. ( That's Leon)
8. [ ] Their eyes change color
9. [ ] They have wings. Johnny: Oh so I'm Vulture now?
10.[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11.[ ] They are immortal. (In the end, yes but not now.)
12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular. (scrawny yet have some muscles like Spider-Man)
14.[X] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. (He's the ladies man and he hooks up a lot of women)
15.[ ] They are psychokinetic/etc.
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. (Terran Ghosts do that so I will excuse this)
17.[X] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (Not sure if nanotech counts)
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20.[ ] They are a healer. (The hell is he, a medic?)
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents. (No, there's a problem between character death and fake death. His dad was just gone missing)
24.[ ] They ran away from home. (He got banished by the UED)
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. Johnny: This is science fiction, not fantasy
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. (Nope, most of his enemies are males)
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends. (90% are women)
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[X] They look much younger/older than they really are. (He's currently 25 but he's physically 15.)
35.[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder. (Can't tell but he's just childish)
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39.[ ] They are a psycho. (Who the hell do you think he is, Joker? )
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities. Johnny:
The0nlyGH0ST has. He plays as different OCs... RIP Leon, you're not being used anymore.
41.[ ] They are very intelligent.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations.
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (This is StarCraft not Final Fantasy)
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. (Yeah.... ghosts.... Terran Ghosts?)
49.[ ] Some part of their body glows. (Not yet)
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. (He's born at Dec 23. Leon shares the same birthday as mine)
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. (Hairstyle was inspired by Hikaru Ichijiyo from Macross)
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66.[X] They are very lively/happy.
67.[X] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient.
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (Have you ever seen a soldier who wears those kind of clothing?)
71.[ ] They have amnesia.
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73.[X] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. (He is involved and he has his own Endgame)
74.[X] They are 'the chosen one'. (He is now XD)
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Total: 9
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [ ] They have a short temper.
6. [x] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [x] They do not care much about others.
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless.
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
*****
Total: 7
Perfectly Balanced, as all things should beYour point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course,
this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then
they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character.
Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down.
They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.
Johnny: Fuck shit, I got nothing to say.. Imma tag the usual shit
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